写作任务
假设你是林彤，这个周末（9月23日、24日）你和David一起游览了绍兴。请你根据下列提示内容，在旅行结束当晚写一篇日记，记录这次旅行。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；
3. 不少于90词。
参考词汇：
素斋 vegetarian food
写作思路与分析
本篇习作要求学生写一篇游记。
首先，我们先来了解一下日记的格式。
英文日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。
● 书端用于记录日记的日期、星期和天气情况。日期和星期写在左上角，天气情况写在右上角。天气情况一般用一个形容词来说明，如：Sunny, Rainy, Snowy。
● 正文：正文内容要求我们写一篇记叙文，记录自己的游览经历以及感受。游记的正文内容通常包括：时间、地点、人物、旅游行程以及你的感受。
具体到本篇习作，可按照以下结构来写：
词汇储备
★你可能会用到的形容词：
interesting, boring, wonderful, exciting, relaxing, enjoyable, excellent
★你可能会用到的其他词汇：
take a trip, be known as, be famous for, arrive at / in, places of interest, enjoy oneself, go sightseeing
句型荟萃
★开头部分：
1. I had a trip with...
2. I went to...with...to spend ...
3. I had a great weekend with…in...
4. I spent…with...
5. Can you guess where I spent...? I went to…
★主体部分：
1. On our arriving at …, we were all filled with excitement.
2. It is famous for...
3. I started my trip in....
4. As soon as we arrived at..., we started our visit.
5. On the first (second, third…) day, we went to / visited / walked around…
6. We tried / tasted …
7. We spent lots of time in ...
8. We visited many places there, including ...
9. It is in the shape of...
10. After that, we went to visit...
11. We moved on and stopped at...
12. My final stop was...
★结尾部分：
1. What an unforgettable trip!
2. I look forward to visiting … next year.
3. … left a deep impression on me.
4. All in all, it was a very enjoyable stay.
5. I had a great time / fun ...
6. This trip is one of the best experiences of my life!
7. I was sad to say goodbye to this great place. It’s really worth visiting.
8. The trip is both relaxing and meaningful. So we all expect for our next coming.
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